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Oct 26, 2021
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Dark Ere Dawn.
They say
there's a lull before the storm
I overheard some one say
it's darkest before dawn
I retaliated man
Are you talking of my
Loveliest Dawn
he blurted
the one ere the sunrise
I smiled I'd never seen one
as I sleep till
SUN'S NOON
So what will I know of nature's dawn
why mourn before the morn
light will come be sure then you may search
what
your gone
dawn .
About This Poem
Last Few Words: TWO DAWNS MORN AND MINE BOTH GONE SINCE LONG
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
3 years 4 months ago
dear lovedly
this is both charming and thoughtful. I admire it much!
*hugs, Cat
lovedly
3 years 4 months ago
thanks a lot
ma'am Cats