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Simon

Dec 16, 2019 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

DARKNESS

The winds of murder
The waves of death
High--tide flows and blows evil.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: The bad eggs in the societies.

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Nigeria , abuja

Favorite Poets: Any good poet of my likening

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C

5 years 6 months ago

Basilmon

flow(s) and blow(s)
add the s to both expand on these ideas thaat you have where do you want to take this

5 years 6 months ago

yes

you are right rough work most of the times it has errors thanks once more