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Jul 03, 2020
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A Day At the Beach
A flash of white makes me hard
thinking of what is below,
and I have taken time
to oil your canvas in my mind
finger painting my desire
as you dance across the sand.
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
5 years ago
Looks like...
another day at the beach. Yeah, we can be vague and yet full of promise. A neat and short poem that leaves much to the imagination. Who? When and why? ~ Geezer.
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jetz
5 years ago
mmmm,
Tan lines!!! I love summer!
+ u