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Day with God (Dream)

You met me in my dreams,
I tried to hug you,
I tried to you catch you,
But my hands were shaking all the time,
My hands were shaking all the time...

Then I ran towards you to touch your feet (Indian Tradition to show respect),
But I wasn't able to touch your feet,
you are so great,
And I am so small in front of you,
Each and everything in this world is you,
I tried to you catch you,
But my hands were shaking all the time,
My hands were shaking all the time...

Then I tried to hold your piece of cloth,
It was like a lightning and thunderstorm,
when the lightning passed it's make me feel joy,
Then I tried to you catch you,
But my hands were shaking all the time,
My hands were shaking all the time...

My whole Soul becomes pure,
I felt you inside me,
I felt black cloud disappears and sky was blue again inside me,
I think you left me alone because you was thinking I am getting mature,
Schrey started finding you again in his dreams,
Then he saw a light,
Then he tried to catch you,
But his hands were shaking all the time,
His hands were shaking all the time...

About This Poem

Last Few Words: It was my weird dream.

Style/Type: Free verse

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: West midlands, GBR

Favorite Poets: My favorite poet is no one. I like Shakespeare because his poetry leaves some good message.

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Comments

Lavender

Lavender

4 years 7 months ago

Day With God (Dream)

Hello, Schrey,
So beautiful. It feels wonderfully personal, yet something that I'm so glad you've shared. I had a dream of meeting God once, also. It will always stay with me. Very beautiful.
Thank you!
Lavender

lovedly

lovedly

4 years 7 months ago

hi Ischrey

Then I runxxxx ran,,,,, towards you to......
But I wouldn'txxxx wasn't ... able......
partly read
the rest edit you may
more may read you then just pray

ISCHRAY
a merry good day