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Neopoem Of The Week Contest December 11th to 17th 2022 Winner
THE DAY OUR TROUBLE BEGAN
Freedom!!! We chanted out as one,
Let the slavery of our children be ended, we say
We battled, we restricted and we conquered.
We formed our government in our castle,
ruled by ourselves for decades,
moments of ecstasy beclouded our faces,
Agriculture was at its peak,
Tolerance was at equilibrium,
We followed our religion wisely;
No religion was greater than another;
We internalized the notions of love, peace and security;
and we were our brother’s keeper.
The day our trouble began
was the day the wheat grown with tares,
without harvesters separating truth from falsehood.
The day our trouble began
was the day we began comparing our differences,
rather than accepting them,
The day we compared the son of Akara seller to a Senator’s son,
The same day our trouble began.
The day our trouble began
was the day we compared a Muslim’s forehead
to a Christian’s knees,
When we regarded one religion as superior than another.
The day our trouble began
was the day we speak ill of a brother,
to undermine his aspiration,
The day a single person conceived to cart away
what is meant for many for himself,
The same day our trouble began!
The day our trouble began
was a day cursed under the scorching sun,
we grieved like they which have no hope,
O Liberty! Which we acclaimed,
If thou could be named again,
let emancipation from this trying day,
come rushing on the breeze!
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
2 years 7 months ago
Congratulations
and Amen to that!
Candlewitch
2 years 7 months ago
well stated and written!!!
well stated and written!!!
*hugs, Cat
Oluwatobi
2 years 6 months ago
Thanks
Thanks
scribbler
2 years 7 months ago
good
job
Oluwatobi
2 years 6 months ago
Thanks
Thanks