On a day of Snowstorm (haiku)

The world turns silent
under thick quiet white blankets
fallen from grey skies

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Earth Vicinity (within a five light-year radius), ZZC

Favorite Poets: John Donne, T.S. Eliot, Serendipity, Emily Dickenson, Kailashana, Charles Bukowski, Kabir, Rett, Dalton, W. B. Yeats, William Blake, Rainer Maria Rilke, and many other Neopoet poets; Neopoet has heavily influenced my poetry and my ability to write it well.

Comments

Ray Whitaker

3 years 4 months ago

Nice haiku

You stuck to the form 5-7-5…. Like this a lot.

Race_9togo

3 years 4 months ago

Thanks man

It's been a while since I wrote a haiku. Good to see I still got it!

Candlewitch

3 years 4 months ago

dear Race,

I really like this piece. it is descriptive of today. how have you been? I miss you. I'll see if I can't get my e-mail addy to you. I would love to communicate with you. :)

love, Cat