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May 13, 2023
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Dear John
Dear John,
May you rot in hell
Buried with your lies
I'm the dirty secret
You wouldn't tell
Dear, dear John,
Karma's a bitch
A far bigger one than I
Such a shame
If your body wound up in a ditch
Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you well
You selfish, sadistic, abusive prick
Not one more tear will fall
May you rot in hell
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
neopoet
2 years 1 month ago
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RoseBlack
2 years 1 month ago
Ahahhaa
AI couldn't find anything good to say about this...that's ok...there is absolutely nothing good about the person it was written about!
Geezer
2 years 1 month ago
One of the best...
Dear John letters I've ever heard!
I am amazed that the AI could find nothing at all to say about this one. It should at least provide a critique on the style, the form and use of language. I felt that this one is a pretty good example of what a real "Dear John" letter should be. Nice work! ~ Geez.
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RoseBlack
2 years 1 month ago
Thank you, Gee
There was some real, raw emotions in that Dear John letter, no words minced. I was very surprised AI had nothing constructive to say about it. Glad you enjoyed!
Ruby Lord
2 years 1 month ago
Loved it, the venom and
Loved it, the venom and malice layered in equal measures. This is the sort of poetry I love, the unexpected. Well done, Ruby :)
RoseBlack
2 years 1 month ago
Hi Ruby
Thank you for your feedback! I am glad you enjoyed!
Seren
2 years 1 month ago
Dear Carrie
This is a scorching Dear John letter. I feel the flames and the anger of someone betrayed.
I'm super surprised the AI had nought to say as well. It's got heat maybe you melted his circuits lol
Good luck in the competition
Much love..
Jayne
RoseBlack
2 years 1 month ago
Hi Jayne
This was certainly raw and emotion filled. I guess AI doesnt like writing outside the box. I'm glad you liked it and glad to see you are back.
Clentin
2 years 1 month ago
I find this poem really
I find this poem really expresses anguish, betrayal and sincere hatred!
It effectively portrays real emotions and feelings.
RoseBlack
2 years 1 month ago
Thank you
This was a very honest write. Glad you enjoyed
Leslie
2 years 1 month ago
This one ripped me up ...
kinda made me sick! I'm sorry you went through what you did to feel this much anger ,
frustration and sorrow.
RoseBlack
2 years 1 month ago
I am not
A horrible vindictive person but this individual certainly has put me through it and brought out the harsher side of me. Writing is my only outlet.
RoseBlack
2 years ago
Thank you
Thank you
Candlewitch
2 years ago
dear Carrie,
congratulation on your emancipation! it is cleansing to write like this. the guy is a tyrant and user!
* love, Cat & eddy
* castration would be a fitting solution!
ever, eddy
RoseBlack
2 years ago
Oh Eddy
I like how you think. Dear John certainly got more then he bargained for...karma really is a bitch...
Unca Fez
2 years ago
A Death Day Wish
If I believed in reincarnation, I would hope that he would be re-born as a girl into a family of child molesters, but that would be asking too much. Maybe just a girl with lesbian tendancies into a Seventh Day Adventist family. In any case, I really enjoyed reading this.
RoseBlack
2 years ago
Thanks Steve
It was definitely a very emotionally charged piece. There were a couple people I had in mind and this is how it played out. Glad you enjoyed.