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Nov 05, 2011
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deeper than meaning
some poetry is dreamy
gliding words slide
winding
warm and enticing
yet a mystery remains
much the same as
not understanding my own dreams
I quite enjoy them anyway
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
weirdelf
13 years 11 months ago
Cute
So do I.
Although I am suspicious of any poem that mentions the words poet, poetry, poem, writing or ink. It is too easy for us to disappear up our own arseholes.
Geezer
13 years 11 months ago
I quite...
understood the inference and connectivity of the lines:
Yet a mystery remains
much the same
as not understanding my own dreams
Not suspicious of this one at all, ~ Gee