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Nov 30, 2014
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Definitely Always Something
Never quite hip
never quite timeless
but
definitely always fearless
In rainbow ships
your chakras less
so
probably never tireless
Vibrations flip
in streams of stringless
chords
perhaps always hapless
Creation is definitely always something...
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
judyanne
10 years 7 months ago
hi ells
your chakras less ... wondering re the text ... do you mean to use an apostrophe?
love - perhaps always hapless lol
and great alliteration especially with the esses
an intruguing and fun read - i enjoyed this
nothing to really suggest
love judy
xxx
judyanne
10 years 7 months ago
hi ells
your chakras less ... wondering re the text ... do you mean to use an apostrophe?
love - perhaps always hapless lol
and great alliteration especially with the esses
an intruguing and fun read - i enjoyed this
nothing to really suggest
love judy
xxx
so sorry - i don't understand why i'm doubling up - it has happened a few times - lol - my latest post even went on twice!!!