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lou

Dec 02, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Deleted Attitude

Ball breaker , heart taker
Urban slut, fuck that

Man eater, Micky taker,
Should know her place.
Hell no.

Foul mouth, hardened
Bitch, slag , bites back
Revenge, on the attack.

To all those who
Attempt to label
Her fuck that

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda , Jack Kerouac, Alan Ginsberg, D.H Lawrence, Jim Morrison's lyrics,

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Hooded Stranger

Hooded Stranger

14 years 7 months ago

Lou

Lou,

well you just rant away!

Great aggression!

HS

14 years 7 months ago

Lol

I was going for the minimal approach.. lol

I had a poem posted on here earlier , and when I came back to update it, there was only half the poem on the page, so I deleted it.
I've added the poem again.

Lou

S

14 years 7 months ago

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In the distant future when you cease to worry so about others' opinions, you might consider saying what you really mean...............lmao........scribbler

14 years 7 months ago

Stan

I always say what I mean lol

This poem is not auto biographical, it is just a means to convey an attitude, that of the subject and the people who judge her. A work of fiction , created purely from the imagination.

Lou x

14 years 7 months ago

Xena

thanks

lou