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Esker
Esker
Jun 06, 2013 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

D...e..m..a..r..c..a..s..h..u..n....

smooth silk the glitter balm
the flat mirror vision
smooth sticky gloss
svelte walk
plumped talk

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Rula

Rula

12 years 1 month ago

thanks

For at least the new voc.
Demarcation (which I suppose is your intended title) a catchy one by the way
And "svelt"
Can I say your piece is of svelte one? For it really is.

loved

loved

12 years 1 month ago

your vocashun

none can shun
your voice is shweet
so loveoly words
only such beauty in dead words
esker alone can inject
at best at worst
occupashun
is his creating verse