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Shark Pool (initial workshop)

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Demons in the Rough-(Shark Pool submission).final edit.

Should life send you wandering
out, and about at twilighttime,

your world could change immediatly
or stop cold, on a dime.

that pathway, that one chooses
will be a lesson learned,

one road will be less travelled
the other, you'll get burned.

Should this twilight force hit you
I can't emphasise, enough;

you're going to pay profusely
for your demons in the rough.

What you have to offer
gets split into two ways,

you are asked to posess the shadows
or, adhere to the light of your days.

Listen t your inner heart
and, I say this..."off the cuff";

for everything you choose in life
you'll create your demons in the rough!

About This Poem

Last Few Words: To the sharkpool, I p[ologse fo no availability. doc.

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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docmaverick

docmaverick

14 years ago

Thanx, Lonnie....

...I kind of know whatyou mean. but, I can't edit ANYTHING It really IS, quite unsetling, what withthis roken keboard!
Nice to hear from you,
sincerely,
docmaverick.