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Jul 27, 2022
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This poem is part of the contest:
Neopopem Of The Week July 24 through July 30th 2022
Desires Whose and What.....CONTEST this current week...
All love life and want to enjoy it .
birds aim to fly sky high
eagles soar higher to view the world entire
moths love to be burnt in candle's flame
Queen bees love to sting every human
tigers love to look after their kids
a lioness loves to smaller animals kill
her hubby is gaping and hungry still
Like-wise my desire is
to love every one.
now spell your lust 'tis my will.
let admiration every one's mission fulfill
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lovedly
2 years 11 months ago
I REPOSTED IT AFRESH
Do scan please July is going
Ray Whitaker
2 years 11 months ago
i like your revisions
Nicely done! the sentiment expressed has complimentary images...
lovedly
2 years 11 months ago
Thank you so muchly
Ray kindness