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Barbara Writes
Barbara Writes
Feb 27, 2018 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

The Devil Is A Liar

The devil is a liar
he swore
it would be different

but we knew
it wouldn’t be
nothing changes

one more time
one more lie
no more chances
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About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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raj

7 years 4 months ago

Hi Barbara

I think this is very open and also out of form. Try to make the reader think which you are more than capable of...i am sure you will do it during edits...

Regards...

Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

7 years 4 months ago

Oh yeah

This wasn’t a sunku lol. I was just writing I’ll change the title