THE DEVIL MAN

She gave her soul
to the old Devil man.
She was only twenty
And when she called
him honey
He gave her plenty.

She gave out
He gave in
It’s all about money
The world turns that way
Now ain’t it so’
Honey ?

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: USA

Comments

Geremia

13 years 3 months ago

Thanks, will add ? My poetry

Thanks, will add ? My poetry is m Svengali. :)

joe

wesley snow

13 years 3 months ago

... you are positively boring for me around here. Nothing to fix, nothing to change. The occasional disagreement on Greek mythology and that's it. That's all you offer this poor mentor/workshop leader/teacher. If you ever need someone to edit your work, I'm your man. I'd just sign off on everything as being "polished draft" and go home. Probably wouldn't even have to read the stuff.
wesley