The Devil's Brain

I am lost deep inside the Devil's brain

Makes me feel like I am so deranged

Fire is burning hot inside of my head

Turns my conscience into ashes of dread

Darkness is devouring my inner thoughts

They are tying me down with evil knots

Internal suffering from vicious pain

Stuck deep inside the Devil's brain

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Southwest United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allen Poe, Jim Morrison, Sylvia Plath

Comments

Rula

2 years 7 months ago

Hello D

This is compelling in a way and yet well written.
It absolutely helps when we are able to put our raging feelings in words .
We are here good listeners anytime, so never hesitate to share

Depressed 1

2 years 7 months ago

Thanks

Thanks Rula I will keep that in mind.

Geezer

2 years 7 months ago

A cry for help...

in the night. It helps to know, that there are others out there. We are all in this together. Keep writing and we will keep listening.
~ Geezer.
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Depressed 1

2 years 7 months ago

Thanks

Thanks Geezer. Writing helps a lot.

Eden Guthrie

2 years 7 months ago

can't stop reading it

This is like one of the best ones I've read to be honest. I love the structure and how it feels so effortless and just plain truth.

Depressed 1

2 years 7 months ago

Thanks

Thanks Eden. I look forward to reading your writings.