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Dec 11, 2022
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This poem is part of the contest:
Neopoem Of The Week Contest December 11th to 17th 2022
Dew Drop
Dewdrop.....
like a teardrop
falling from its eyes
Display through the
tiny crystal silver drops
Lingering on the exquisite
soft petal rose
Quenching the green thirst flourish leaf
Through the early misty morning rise
Waiting for the gentleness caressing
To dissolve from its cleaning touch
Ease away the misery bitterness frost cold
With a warmth nurturing quest embrace
To bring joy and delight to the new day
About This Poem
Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Triskelion
2 years 7 months ago
reciprocity
Oh, dragonfly, your wistful verses sing
while dewdrops dry upon your crystal wing
Of you, I ponder; great and wondrous thing
and dream of lucky days you seem to bring
Oh! Come and rest a while; linger
Adorn my hand; a ring upon my finger
Thomas
Geezer
2 years 7 months ago
Looks like...
a close -up look at a flower in the early morning. ~ Geezer.
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Triskelion
2 years 7 months ago
It also seems
it may have a subliminal erotic flair to it.
I wonder…
Thomas