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DID YOU BLOW

BLOW HOT BLOW COLD BUT SLOW
Here it's biting cold
the beginning of frost
take care all
lest it bites your feet

slowly winter is setting
life is becoming dull
and boring

no work old age is a curse
but not yet not as worse

life is like Christmas Bells
at times only
you feel like asking
for whom the bell tolls

read my tribute to
FLASHY

You will see me
ma'am
Gracy

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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scribbler

4 years 7 months ago

age and winter

They seem to go hand in hand. Yet winter is still my second favorite season. Like your poem.

lovedly

lovedly

4 years 7 months ago

Thanks stan

if winter comes
can spring be far away
so spring up stan