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Aug 22, 2022
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Difference faces
My friends all wear different faces
Sometimes they lie but my heart still embraces
They use my love against me for any reason .
When will I find the friendship's I've been chasing
Regret and blame are my regular places
They are the nightmares that my mind embraces .
I I'm healing now because my true love said to me only my heart is the face you will ever see
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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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Geezer
2 years 10 months ago
I got...
the story. I like the fact that you used near-rhyme in the fourth line and didn't really question it, because it was close enough.
I think you can do better with the last line.
Break it into two lines to read: I'm healing now, because my true love said to me
."My heart is the only face you will see.".
~ Geezer.
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