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May 09, 2025
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Digging for Spring
If only
I can dig
For spring,
And find a way
To the coin of hope
For a few thousand
Tied souls to ring
But alas!
Death has the
Loudest voice
To sing across
My home land
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Lavender
1 month 2 weeks ago
Digging For Spring
Hello, Rula,
The loudest voice... I wish it weren't so, and I hope it ends soon.
Lxxx
Rula
1 month 2 weeks ago
Dearest Lavender
Thank you as always for reading and commenting.
It's awful what's happening there. Sorry if it's all what I'm expressing these days.
Thank you.