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May 09, 2018
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Dis[s ]agreement:
Time to display concerted might
Two nays suffice to break the deal
No one else seems to know what's right
To most it’s agreed ideal
Unilateralism senseless
Better agree to disagree
Forbearance does not make one less
Same peer treatment will set you free
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
chevyvent
7 years 2 months ago
Very deep introspective writing taken from the heart
Very deep introspective writing taken from the heart. To impart a beautiful manifestation of creativity to the arts. Really can connect to your material it behooves me to decline commenting on other persons poetry. This piece is enlightened straight forward to the point. Thank you for the opportunity to read.
OriginalRhyku
7 years 2 months ago
Mario
thanks for your kind review. Poetry is my space to vent, invent and reinvent my thoughts. I m glad that other fine poets like yourself find something to like in my poetic offerings.
gregwa8
7 years 2 months ago
I like the rhythm and rhyme.
I like the rhythm and rhyme. the theme of trying to work together, and the puzzle of your words, is encouraging. there are lines that you could set to memory and benefit from in your daily life. "same peer treatment will set you free." "forbearance does not make one less." nice.
OriginalRhyku
7 years 2 months ago
Greg
Thanks for your appreciation. It is encouraging when peer poets and reviewers like your work. Please take a look at some of my other poetic offerings when you have some time.