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May 15, 2016
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DIVINITY--updated
DIVINITY
I catch glimpses of shadows
from the corner of my eye,
unexpected intrusions, like ghosts,
fleeting quickly by.
I feel chills from deep inside,
a feverish anticipation
that steals my mind,
and a sickening intuition
of some future time...
a frightful presence divine
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
judyanne
9 years 2 months ago
powerful Joe
Can I suggest a small change in preseentation
Imo it just might read more smoothly as
a feverish anticipation
that steals my mind,
and a sickening intuition
of some future time...
Love judy
xxx
Geremia
9 years 2 months ago
done. thanks. joe
done. thanks.
joe