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DIVINITY--updated

DIVINITY

I catch glimpses of shadows
from the corner of my eye,
unexpected intrusions, like ghosts,
fleeting quickly by.
I feel chills from deep inside,
a feverish anticipation
that steals my mind,
and a sickening intuition
of some future time...
a frightful presence divine

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judyanne

judyanne

9 years 2 months ago

powerful Joe

Can I suggest a small change in preseentation
Imo it just might read more smoothly as

a feverish anticipation
that steals my mind,
and a sickening intuition
of some future time...

Love judy
xxx