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A Doctor's Patience
I know exactly what's up, friend
and I usually have things right;
but in my quest to not offend
I'll try my best to seem polite.
I don't care much for conflict, so
at those times I may look away;
but, I'll remember times with you
wish I'd stayed at home that day!
You're brand of scandalousity
does almost make me ill;
a detour would have set me free
avoiding clashes with your will.
Your hidden mind agendas, or
what really makes me tense;
is, I could be a "real doctor"
if I'd possessed patients!
doc.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: A little "fun" with the spellings of "patience", and "patients"! Sorry.....won't happen, again.......probably. doc.
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Draft
Critiques
BlueDemon77
14 years ago
Enjoyable Poem
Well Done Doc, I enjoyed it. You have a fun laid back voice. It reminds me most closely of Robert E. Howard's A Gent from Bear Creek. Thanks for the reminder that all poetry doesn't have to be about pain, death, grief, or lost love. Good to virtually meet you also!.
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