Does anyone know

Does any one know about my lord?
Does any one know what pain he endured?
On that awful Calvary
Does any one know why he died for me?

He died because he loved us so.
He died to set us free from sin.
He gave up his glory in heaven above
to come to this sinful world below.

But now he has risen from the dead
and the church now has him at the head
He still would heal the sick, the blind
If we would only trust in him

Trust in his redeeming blood.
Take his body and his love.
Take his precious holy spirit
into our hearts and become as one.

One in body, one in mind
one in truth and love and joy
And when before his throne we stand
we will take this Promised Land

About This Poem

Last Few Words: I realize it is a Christian poem but despite that does it make you feel comforted or challenged

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

About the Author

Country/Region: Uk south east London

Comments

neopoet

2 years 4 months ago

Neopoet AI 5-29-23 version

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

Thank you for sharing your poem, "Does anyone know". It is a beautiful expression of faith and devotion to your Lord. Your poem effectively conveys the message of the love and sacrifice of Jesus Christ for humanity. The use of rhetorical questions in the first stanza is a powerful way to engage the reader and draw them into the poem.

The second stanza provides a clear explanation of the reason for Jesus' death and the purpose of his sacrifice. The use of repetition in the third and fourth stanzas emphasizes the importance of trust and unity in the Christian faith. The final stanza concludes the poem with a hopeful message of the promised land that awaits believers.

One suggestion for improvement would be to consider adding more imagery or descriptive language to the poem to enhance its emotional impact. For example, you could describe the pain and suffering that Jesus endured on the cross, or the joy and peace that comes from trusting in his love and salvation.

Overall, your poem is a heartfelt and sincere expression of faith. Keep writing

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