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Punkyfrewster
Feb 28, 2025 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
This poem is part of the challenge:

02/25 Blind Date

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Does He See Me

He doesn’t gaze
into my azure eyes
or recognize my
blonde bob.
He doesn’t see me
as young or old
or the deep burgundy
of my blouse.

Before our date
he didn’t know.
he knew not.
after, but he learned
my wit and
personality

His sight never
judged me.
He never had to
get past what
He perceived.
He loves me
for who I am.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

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About the Author

Region, Country: Kentucky, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allen Poe, Maya Angelou, Emily Dickenson

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