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Jan 05, 2022
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DON'T EVER RUN
DON'T RUN
to no where
but in circles
nothing beyond beyond
best is you know it
but won't ever accept it
you leave your heart and eyes
all to fire or dust consigned
where
behind
for Earths consumption
newer evolution
continuation
can't you understand
if not hold my hand
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
3 years 6 months ago
You do...
seem to have a way to circumvent the situational conditions. I wish that you could put as much effort into writing something light hearted and less somber. Nevertheless, a nice effort! ~ Geez.
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lovedly
3 years 6 months ago
Gee
this one was on someones poem here
keep running
searching angels and dead ones
near about eternity
lol