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Jan 04, 2011
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Don't Ruin the Silence
You are the one
I've been hoping for all my life,
you are the one
I'd adore to be my wife,
In the silence
I can hear your heartbeat,
and, I can hear the echoes, but not by choice;
when I can't hear your heartbeat,
don't ruin the silence with your voice.
I am the one
you said you'd cling to, with all your might;
I am the one
with whom you hold, throughout the night;
I can hear your voice
so loud, in the echoes, through the tears,
when I can't hear your heartbeat
don't ruin the silence, with your ears.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
docmaverick
14 years 6 months ago
Heartbeat...
..rhymes with heartbeat.