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lovedly
lovedly
Aug 19, 2014 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Don't stay lonely

I beg to disagree

Life, single and lonely
is like a palm tree
high above the beach
in the sky
neither bears fruit,
nor shares shade
ere in the tsunami of life
it finally fades

life is like wise

Feel for yourself
as a butterfly
in a flame
it also to find love tries
but it dies

so we must also give
our love a chance
where in we cherish
life's romance

a single bird
can be lonely
never a summer
it can ever
bring for thee

will your isolatary vision
change ye!

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

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Comments

Rula

Rula

10 years 11 months ago

Though I believe

That we need sometime off of everything mundane, but not a too long one.
I loved the examples that you've used. Especially the first. I thought it supurb.

Life, single and lonely
is like a palm tree
high above the beach
in the sky
neither bears fruit nor shares shade
ere in the tsunami of life it finally dies

isolatary [isolation?]

lovedly

lovedly

10 years 11 months ago

thanks -------------------the errors

creation
as I use newer words
not included in dictionary

and YES....

Life, single and lonely
is like a palm tree
high above the beach
in the sky
neither bears fruit
nor shares shade

JUST STANDS BY
ere in the tsunami of life it finally dies

alidzain

alidzain

10 years 11 months ago

lovely

Oh the lovely poem,
sparkled like a gem.
Words of wisdom
along with the rhythm

When it is lovely ,
its as lovely as it gets
but when words are too many (in each lines, that is)
it makes me mad.

Alid