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Jul 04, 2024
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Dragon Dawn...
Dragon's breath tainted with gold
a piece of fair maid in his teeth.
Snoring lightly, blowing smoke rings
resembling holiday wreaths.
Green and bronze scales, so pretty
burnished by the sun,
glisten in the dawn of tomorrow
seeing his enemies run.
Awaken, continue your terror,
stretch your wings out and fly
Scorch the earth, make it ashes
seeing your enemy's cry
Black are the shadows of flight,
wings that quiver and float,
winging over the castle,
see the bridge down over the moat.
Merlin has taken vacation,
Sir Arthur is beating back trolls
Take advantage of the situation,
this dragon is on a great roll.
Toothpick lances of heroes
bloody slivers of wood,
As a day in the life of a dragon,
this one's particularly good.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Thanks Lavender, for the heads up.
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
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