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Neopoet Weekly 07/7/24 to 07/13/24
Date Due: July 13th 2024, at 12 Noon Eastern Time
Contest Guidelines: 40 lines or less and written in any form of poetry, and one poem per member.
Prize: One month Premium, Recognition on your profile and published in our anthology.
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Coal Mine Canary
Submitted by hippiemoon
Do you know about coal mine canaries?
They used to take caged birds down into the coal mines,
And when they would die the workers would know to leave too.
Let me be a canary in your chest.
Let me live inside your rib cage,
Feel your heart beat for me,
Watch your blood flow through your veins.
Keep me safe next to your heart
And I’ll keep you safe from all that’s bad.
Use me as your compass,
I’ll tell you to run when things get hard.
Let me be your coal mine canary.
Let me sacrifice myself to save you from the inevitable.
Contest Details
Dates: Jun 25, 2025 — Jun 25, 2025
Status: Concluded
Winning Entry: Coal Mine Canary
Comments

hello hippimoon,
this is an exceptional write! Congratulations on the win. it is well deserved!
*hugs, Cat

Thank you so much Cat!! I
Thank you so much Cat!! I appreciate your support and kind words :)
Best,
hippiemoon


Candlewitch
11 months 2 weeks ago
hello hippimoon,
this is an exceptional write! Congratulations on the win. it is well deserved!
*hugs, Cat
hippiemoon
11 months 1 week ago
Thank you so much Cat!! I
Thank you so much Cat!! I appreciate your support and kind words :)
Best,
hippiemoon
kowque
11 months 2 weeks ago
Win queen
Well deserved
hippiemoon
11 months 1 week ago
Thank you so much!!
Thank you so much!!
Best,
hippiemoon