Dream

Sleep .... perchance to ..dream

How serene and peaceful a nice minimalist Ode to sleep

Thanks Lavendar for share 

Sen99

Beautifully written to say farewell to a loved one.

Thank you for sharing

Thank you for this gentle poem that makes the reader pause, reflect, and appreciate.

Once again, your words are filled with hope and kindness, at a time when they are in short supply.

All my best, Will

they are only sleeping, to a rest they come. Waiting, waiting for us to catch up. I like the gentle euphonism, it sounds so much better than death, a rather harsh divorce from our lives. 

Enjoyed the read. I think you want o'er, not o're, though why not over?

fancy, line 5, seems an odd choice of word.

now, it just rolls off the tongue. I read that right through the second time around! Sweet! ~ Geez.

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Oh, Yes,,, I'll 'av a bit o' that !

Obi.

I like how the stars act like a quiet guard watching over the sleeping. The poem feels like you have just laid down on the softest bed after a long tiring day. I really liked this one.