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Jun 24, 2022
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DREAM WIFE
She is a dream wife
Her who is instinctive
Whose life is progressive
She is a dream wife
Her who is proactive
Whose senses are positive
She is a dream wife
Her who is persuasive
Whose care is attentive
She is a dream wife
Her who is generative
Whose present is curative
She is a dream wife
Her who is motivative
Whose words are motive
She is a dream wife
Her who is intuitive
Whose feelings are impressive
She is a dream wife
Her who is educative
Whose thoughts are sensitive
©NYOK MAKER MARENG
About This Poem
Review Request Direction: What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Mr joghe
3 years ago
Nice piece of writing!
Nice piece of writing!
You have appreciated your dream wife with the choice of word. I believe she will smile when she read it. I like the whole stanza.