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Jan 10, 2018
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Dreams
Dreams are a pathway to a faraway land called dreamland They take me away from the here and now In my dreams I can be anybody anything We all hope our dreams will come true Dreams make reality bearable Dreams are a means of escaping reality With dreams our lives are filled with gaiety
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Dear Neopoets please tell me your views about my poem. Send your replies to my email address ifeanyiiweze@yahoo.com My user name is Eulekia.
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What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?
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Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
raj
7 years 6 months ago
suggestion
Theme is good...put it in verse form...your current version is in prose
Simon
7 years 6 months ago
Perfect poem.
Dreams are really partway to unknown, dreams are some how a confusing if we can't properly interpret them thanks for this drop.
Simon
7 years 6 months ago
Perfect poem.
Dreams are really partway to unknown, dreams are some how a confusing if we can't properly interpret them thanks for this drop.