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Dual Views
Vaginal Dawn
I have just scanned the first one because
It fits into my minds cemented imagination,
That all human beings,
Men and women ''''sexercise,''''
Both physically when they can
And
Mentally towards the end,
As they seek salvation,
Sexercise in imagination…
So ma’am, you have chained the vagina
That most men seek
Throughout the sojourn
Of their trembling intimidating life,
Towards the sparkling of Gods potency
All men's acumen
In human semen
2.Thanking Your Inspiration.
Thanks for smaller mercies
Upon the will of kind folks
I do survive,
As a bee does around the beehive
Mostly insects flicker around a candle flame
And burn them up to earn a name.
So be it with me,
I burn the midnight oil with glee
And
Hopefully my works shall
Some day immortal be
So dear friends bow to thee
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Nordic cloud
13 years 6 months ago
Its all only natural.
Its all only natural, no big deal really, only we make it into that.
Not such an exciting thought but that's it.
Glad to inspire however. Ann
loved
13 years 6 months ago
Thanks a lot
Ma'am
EX ISTAN
NOW LOVED
scribbler
13 years 6 months ago
Hi loved
a bit of truth put to verse lol. You might consider changing intimidating to intimidated unless it messes up what you wish to convey........stan
loved
13 years 6 months ago
Shall
I have learnt or learned??which!
only two things in life
First is accept your mistake
and
Second fight for your rights.
Thanks Stan our man..