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Jun 13, 2013
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dub
we wasted false idols
bathing in the turn basins
a summer sky flamed
voltile
crawling through weeds
the summer shone
in your rich irises
the night burned
in the bright pupil mystery
the dead apostles we scrawled
on our mounts
war horses
scratched
like us
enriched with scars
believers of the great pain
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
ida
12 years 1 month ago
martyrs
causes unrelenting
ideals seducing a tender touch
fingers trace forbidden valleys
breast and bone
lingering
scars etched
upon the entwined
ignorant vessels
searching
for glory
undelivered
your words bathe me
thank you
for more than your words
Esker
12 years 1 month ago
"and the snow fell beyond the wicked crutch of cherry worlds"
muskoka morning birthed in arctic aurora..
For your eyes only....