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Lavender
Oct 21, 2020 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

The Dust Bowl

Barren cradle in the nursery
Cold kettle on the stove
Withered stubble in the fields
Empty baskets in the grove

Forsaken table in the kitchen
Useless broom by the screen door
Yellowed paper on the sofa
Frayed carpet on the floor

Tangled hangers in the closet
Tattered sheets across the bed
Haunted boots on the porch step
Rusty hammer in the shed

How the dust and wind battered
Swept away a life once lived
How a farmer and a family fled
When the farm had no more to give.

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About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: United States

Favorite Poets: I tend to read Ted Kooser, Jim Harrison, Billy Collins, Paul Simon, Robert Frost. I like minimalist poetry, and poems reflecting on nature and Mother Earth.

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manofgod255

4 years 8 months ago

like the ending

the ending is pretty nice; it gives me a feeling of finishing a long, good book series and adds a touch of mystery.

Lavender

Lavender

4 years 8 months ago

Hello!

Thank you so much for spending time and commenting. I look forward to reading your poetry!
Lavender

Lavender

Lavender

4 years 8 months ago

Hello, Teddy

An extremely harsh period in the United States during most of the 1930s decade. Recently saw a documentary that suggested that soil tilling greatly contributed to the massive devastation.
Thank you so much, Teddy!
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Midge

4 years 4 months ago

Very good!

A touching poem about an unnecessary tragedy.

Lavender

Lavender

4 years 8 months ago

Hello, Alan

Yes, I'm familiar with John Steinbeck's work, in this case, The Grapes of Wrath, although it has been awhile. I would like to read again - maybe after this pandemic and election have passed and my emotions are a bit less fragile. :) I saw a documentary on climate control called "Kiss the Ground" recently. Just one of the many suggestions was that soil tilling contributed to the Dust Bowl, which led to re-studying that period. Horrible, horrible time. There are many images of once productive farms completely abandoned.
Thank you so much!
L

Lavender

Lavender

4 years 8 months ago

Exactly!

Trying to stay optimistic regarding both!
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Geezer

Geezer

4 years 8 months ago

I was...

impressed that you put the [D] on the end of live to make sure that the pronunciation stayed with give; instead of making it live with a long I. It didn't change the meaning of the word, yet stayed true to the rhyme. Nice! ~ Geez.
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Lavender

Lavender

4 years 8 months ago

Hi, Geezer

So funny that you mentioned that - although I think it works as far as rhyme and sound, that "d" just looks out of place to me. Always appreciate your views!
Thank you!
L

Lavender

Lavender

4 years 8 months ago

Hi, Jerry

I imagine there is an eeriness and an emptiness - I've only seen photos. The toll was so great...
Thank you, Jerry!
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c lynn brooks

4 years 8 months ago

Lavender

soryy I am late This is absolute perfection I was able to picture all of it the imagery is strong

Lavender

Lavender

4 years 8 months ago

Hello, Thalassa

Yes, it is Western. I very seldom write anything other than free verse - creature of habit. I will change that.
Thank you so much!
Lavender

Geezer

Geezer

4 years 4 months ago

I loved...

this look at at a story that could become a recurring one, even in this day and age. If we continue to plow and use land that once was woodlands and vital areas for watersheds and then we have another weather upheaval in the table-lands of America, we are in deep doo-doo!
Nice look at the farms that were abandoned and lost. Great rhyme and not a thing to criticize! ~ Geez.
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Lavender

Lavender

4 years 4 months ago

Hi, Geezer

I agree with you. The documentary "Kiss The Ground" touched on the impact of destroying our land, and ways to help.
Thank you!
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Midge

4 years 4 months ago

A few notes on the Dust Bowl

Following on from other comments by members.....the "Dust Bowl" was caused mainly by ignorance. Various Acts of the US Congress encouraged people westwards by incentivising farming in the Great Plains; this led to a vast influx of inexperienced would-be farmers who were led to believe "rain would follow the plough" and that homesteading and agriculture would somehow make a semi-arid area fertile, tragically this was linked to a widespread belief that these pioneers had a "sacred duty" to expand the USA west.

Rising wheat prices led these inexperienced farmers to plough up millions of acres of grassland to plant wheat and corn and when the Depression hit, market prices plummeted and they then tore up even more grassland in an attempt to harvest bumper crops. The result was disaster: crops failed in the drought years, the over-ploughed farmland was exposed to the elements and without prairie grasses to hold the soil in place, it began to blow away...this led to massive dust storms and economic devastation. Sadly it was a man-made disaster which need never have happened.

And yes, "The Grapes of Wrath" is a fine novel and a fine film with Henry Fonda.

Lavender

Lavender

4 years 3 months ago

Hi, Midge

It was truly a horrific time in U.S. history. Thank you for reading and sharing your considerable knowledge!
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Midge

4 years 3 months ago

I cheated!

In fact I recently saw a programme on TV, "The Dust Bowl", a documentary by Ken Burns (who made "The Civil War" epic documentary).

Geezer

Geezer

4 years 3 months ago

Why...

is that cheating? I often use things that have occurred in my daily life to write poems and even things I have seen on TV.
As said before, this is an excellent piece and the only way I would call it cheating; is if someone else wrote it for you. ~ Geezer
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Midge

4 years 3 months ago

You misunderstand!

Lavender complimented me on my knowledge of the Dust Bowl disaster - I only knew a lot about it because I had seen the TV show and read about it recently.

Lavender

Lavender

4 years 3 months ago

Hi, Midge,

I fully agree with Geezer - not cheating! I watched an excellent documentary called "Kiss The Ground" which prompted this piece. It's good to keep these historic moments fresh. I really appreciate what you brought by sharing.
Thank you!
L