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Mar 26, 2012
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Echo's Litany
Echo's realm is your sub conscience mind
Weaving words for you to find
A continuous litany,like a Mobius Strip
Sleep is the trigger that will trip
Born on the ash of a lost ember
In fitful dream
To be remembered
the laughter
Echo etches images
upon corridor walls
there in your memory
to be recalled
the words
Echo hums a familiar song
You've not heard it for so long
soft,softer
echo,echo gone
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
China Blue
13 years 3 months ago
Lon
many thanks again
Candlewitch
13 years 3 months ago
Dear Chrys,
Your fertile mind, which comes through in all your works, is astounding. Good title, excellent imagery and flow through. I love the concept!
always, Cat (& eddy)
China Blue
13 years 3 months ago
Cat
my thanks to you good lady will tell you why this was written but not here