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Apr 17, 2018
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Either side of Niagara
Either side of Niagara
In spring it's snowing
in USA
as you all say
Ice breezy snow
here
come and see
Canada will ye
on either side
of NIAGARA
stand you and me
the daffodils are blooming
the birds chirping
in your place
come over aside
and look over my shoulders
no you won't recognize
Lovedly
covered in the blue rain coat fully
here it is still chilly
snowing like the winters' freeze
come and see me
Niagara is where we may meet
across all barriers
No Mexico wall here
Niagara to all USA-ites
and
Canadiens
is lovably
adorable my dear
poetically
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Lord Barham
7 years 3 months ago
Spring hasn't quite sprung!
Sounds like you're having the same kind of Spring in Niagara as we're having in Vancouver – except that, with us, it's unending, dreary rain, same as last year (though we had snow for the first time in living memory in April last Winter). I wrote a poem about it last year and another one this year. There's something about Spring delayed that seems inspiring in a dispirited sort of way. Lovely poem! Hope to see more from you on here.
lovedly
7 years 3 months ago
Thank you so much Lord Barham
It seems we are poets
Canadiens
Great fun
Thanks for the encouragement
(do read my advisory only comments on your poem)
raj
7 years 3 months ago
good attempt to write on a
good attempt to write on a favorite topic these days "Spring"..
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lovedly
7 years 3 months ago
Thank you raj
are you about Niagara
such a speedy response
Thanks friend
I read all your poems
but do not have the guts
to comment on any
your ability surpasses me....