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Oct 04, 2018
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Eleagance
I am smooth
I am sleek
I glide through life effortlessly
People want me for prestige
I attract those who wish to walk with me
I am eleagant thats plain to see
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Last Few Words: Dear Neopoets what do think of my poem? send your comments. You can reply me at my email address ifeanyiiweze@yahoo.com Eulekia
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Rula
6 years 8 months ago
Hello
do you mean 'Elegance'?
Good definition of elegance. I suggest dropping the last line as it adds nothing to the text(imo)