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Jun 03, 2025
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Embrace the Rain
In the soft putter of the rain,secrets of the Earth are unveiled without a hint of disdain.
When skies are gray and time feels strained, the rains are embraced and hope is regained.
I wait here in the fields, a wee lass, to see how well the rain brings on the grass longer than a man's life. I am at some, praying he makes me his wife.
A symphony of love Devine through cloudy skies of blue.in the rain's embrace, so fine.we leap,two souls in love forever deep,a lifetime.
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