Rhiannon1010

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Emergancy Exit... (A ROUND ROBIN POEM)

Inspired by SCRIBBLER! just post 1 stanza at a time to continue the poem. Let's see where this goes.

Groping in the darkness...
Where is it? WHERE IS IT!?!
Looking for the cold release of steel.
Frantic in the search for death.

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: North Carolina, USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Alfred Noyes, T. S. Eliot, Lewis Carroll, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, William Wordsworth, William Blake, Seamus Heaney, Robert Herrick

Comments

weirdelf

13 years 10 months ago

continued

in frantic reckless
there is only shit
to search to feel
they find only crystal meth

scribbler

13 years 10 months ago

3rd stanza

Too many false starts mark my arm
from other shouts for help or aid
all too shallow for real harm
now where's that sharper blade?

I'll need others to cut and paste this together. NEXT! lol

Rhiannon1010

13 years 10 months ago

Groping in the darkness...

Groping in the darkness...
Where is it? WHERE IS IT!?!
Looking for the cold release of steel.
Frantic in the search for death.

in frantic reckless
there is only shit
to search to feel
they find only crystal meth

Too many false starts mark my arm
from other shouts for help or aid
all too shallow for real harm
now where's that sharper blade?

weirdelf

13 years 10 months ago

7th stanza (greedy Rhiannon!)

The inevitable psychosis
is positive osmosis
of brain cells dead
positive dread

Rhiannon1010

13 years 10 months ago

lol Why the 7th stanza?

lol
Why the 7th stanza?

weirdelf

13 years 10 months ago

Stan asked for one stanza each

but no biggy

Rhiannon1010

13 years 10 months ago

was just wondering why 7th

was just wondering why 7th and not 4th? its fine, lol

weirdelf

13 years 10 months ago

True, evertything is all my fault

mea culpa mea culpa mea culpa mea culpa mea culpa mea culpa

and proud of it.

weirdelf

13 years 10 months ago

Rhiannon, may I suggest you put together what we have here

in one poem, then decide whether to continue or you write an end verse,

Rhiannon1010

13 years 10 months ago

one last stanza, first come first serve

Groping in the darkness...
Where is it? WHERE IS IT!?!
Looking for the cold release of steel.
Frantic in the search for death.

in frantic reckless
there is only shit
to search to feel
they find only crystal meth

Too many false starts mark my arm
from other shouts for help or aid
all too shallow for real harm
now where's that sharper blade?

No fear a slow release
Red ribbons of grace descend
Give me my self
Let me go damn you

raj

13 years 10 months ago

Groping in the darkness...

Groping in the darkness...
Where is it? WHERE IS IT!?!
Looking for the cold release of steel.
Frantic in the search for death.

in frantic reckless
there is only shit
to search to feel
they find only crystal meth

Too many false starts mark my arm
from other shouts for help or aid
all too shallow for real harm
now where's that sharper blade?

No fear a slow release
Red ribbons of grace descend
Give me my self
Let me go damn you

Cold death grips my tongue
Your voices will cease
I sink away from you
Into this hellish abyss

Now embalmed in darkness
there is no fear of death
with all worldly sins
now light years away...

scribbler

13 years 10 months ago

last line

Even I finally did something right................................

raj

13 years 10 months ago

Hi Stan

i couldn't understand what you mean by "Even i finally did something right"...can you please expand on that?..please do..

Rhiannon1010

13 years 8 months ago

AND HERE IT ALL IS!