Emotions In Seasons: How I feel and my favorites

I thought you're doing great here with your perception of the four seasons and how do your emotions go from one to another. The contest asked for your emotions at your favorite one, but you were really successful to make us, the readers, feel like every season is special for you.
A winner entry indeed!
Best wishes dear and
thank you for sharing

the meter gets rough here and there, I am appreciative of the story and the way you have gone through the moods and the seasons. Nice work. ~ Geez.
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Poetically energetic and powerful imagery " January the sign of the wolf"!

How wonderful is your eloquence, pouring into my voids, creativity overflowing and flourishing with sincerity and distinction. Very beautiful.
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This is my feel of the ryhthm and meter here:

Add a comma after hand.
Delete the [with] and add a [d] to inspire,
the word is strong enough that the extra [d] won't affect it.

Leave off the [ly] on velvet or leave out the word velvet altogether,
Say lit instead of alight, and say most holy night or [on this Yule night].

[To bring] instead of bringing

Delete [me] the rest of the line is fine

Get rid of the [and] use a comma, stillness reigns

Gather on Allhallow's eve, eventide of All Saint's Day
Feelings of awe come over me, in separation of night and day
quiet observance in shadows, keeping the hounds at bey!

Thank you for the punctuation, it helped guide me here.

Title's good, the language is better, and the theme very nice.
As always, the suggestions are to use or not, it's your work!
I hope this helps. Good luck, ~ Geez.
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but delete
OUTSIDE
it always snows outside
to me it appears redundant
but
velvet would or may be better .....
may c
all d best
Now I don't
Contest

That’s a lot of ground to cover in 6 stanzas. As always you’ve got a pretty refined poem here. This one is really tight and flowing. A nice meandering dream through the seasons of your mind.

Love it
Tim

As are you. I’ll forget that time you roasted me for starting lines with conjunctions, which I now think about every time I write and I look for it in other people’s writing as well.

I am really only fond of one season, the one that makes me look normal even if it is only for a couple of months! Great job!

Thus is a wonderful poem, is winter your favourite season cosseting in the warmth of the cold months? I only ask because it was the only season with more than one stanza? I think your language use was on point. I can't see anything I'd change. I thoroughly enjoyed the read I would love to hibernate in the winter before a blazing fire, I love the feeling of nesting in the warm months maybe one day I'll get to experience that snowy isolation.

Brava!!!

Love you Sis xxx

you have completely changed the whole poem; I will assume that you weren't satisfied with what you had.
So, here are a few things that I thought would help. I would change 2nd line of stanza two, to read:

It accumulates a new blanket of white, or
Accumulating a blanket of white

[meeting] with the full moon?

Delete [thoughts]

bring[s]?

giv[ing] delete [as] from end of line

Delete [a] from line: vast wealth of his affection, [not] a dearth

Feelings of awe overcome me, in [between night and day]?

I think that it is just a matter of a little adjustment of meter
to make this great poem!

You know that these are just my suggestions, you can use or discard any or all.
P.S. thanks for the punctuation! LoL You CAN do it, but you decide if you really need it or not.
~ Geez.
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