Rula

Dec 26, 2022 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

This poem is part of the contest:

Emotions In Seasons (A Loooooop Sonnet) (December Contest)

Unlike the ice cream, summer's hot
Hot enough to let the ice-creams melt
Melt out of heat, and you shall sweat
Sweat from heat like when ice-creams melt.

I like ice-creams, unlike summers
Summers that bring the awful pests
Pests in swarms that live on the cheeks
Cheeks that no one would like to kiss.

Summers bring colourful flowers
Flowers and colours that I love
Love that you and everyone seek
Seek the beauty when summers come.

I like flowers, I like summers
Summers, flowers and ice creams.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: I know there's loop poetry but not sure about loooop sonnets.Lol

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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Comments

Candlewitch

2 years 6 months ago

dear Rula,

very clever piece! hope your christmas was full of love and companionship.

*hugs, Cat

Rula

2 years 6 months ago

Thank you. It's been my pleasure to know you've enjoyed my loop sonnet. Hope you didn't feel dizzy reading it all the way through.
Thank you too for your kind wishes anyways.
As a Muslim, I only celebrate two eids, Al-Fitr and Al-Adha.
Again, thank you and best wishes go to you as well dear friend.

Candlewitch

2 years 6 months ago

I don't know much...

about the Muslim religion but I am willing to learn :) I am Pagan/Wiccan after having a serious fall out from the christian religion (which left scars, both physical and emotional. which is why I spend time picking apart the christian bibles (lies) in their stories. just thought I would clear that up, lol!

*love & hugs, Cat & eddy styx

Rula

2 years 6 months ago

Fortunately

dear Cat, everything we need to learn nowadays becomes at our fingertips. Never lose hope to find your way.

Candlewitch

2 years 6 months ago

dear Rula,

my husband just informed me that he works with several worshipers of the Muslim faith. Sam, a man I greatly admire, who works with Steven is one. and although he is now an American, keeps his faith. I can ask him if I have any questions. thanks!

*hugs, Cat

Lavender

2 years 6 months ago

Emotions in Season

Hello, Rula,
Very creative! I felt your joy here! I, too, love the beauty and essence of summer and enjoyed your poem very much!
L

Rula

2 years 6 months ago

Hello dear Lavender

I'm happy to know that you've enjoyed this one. I was just hoping you won't go dizzy at the mid of the loop :)
Thank you so much.