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Aug 05, 2024
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The End of Us Both
one of these days
my head will explode
and the shards of my thoughts
will slit your throat
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
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Neopoet AI 5-29-23 version
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