Endless Quest

This quiet night is filled with dreams,
asleep, it seems.
The moon hangs low,
the stars, aglow.

And I, I gaze toward this sky
and ponder why
I'm here at all,
so meek, so small.

While far beyond, the endless quest
to know, attest
if God is there
to hear my prayer.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: A Minute poem.

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: United States

Favorite Poets: I tend to read Ted Kooser, Jim Harrison, Billy Collins, Paul Simon, Robert Frost. I like minimalist poetry, and poems reflecting on nature and Mother Earth.

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Comments

William Lynn

3 months 3 weeks ago

Hello

Hello Lavender.

Thank you for sharing this short poem. It shows how much can be achieved with minimal word count. You said what need to be said, beautifully.

I enjoyed this poem a great deal. - Will

Lavender

3 months 3 weeks ago

Hello, Will,

Thank you very much for reading. I appreciate your comments!

Happy New Year!

Rula

3 months 3 weeks ago

Dear Lavender

A very tender piece you've penned here . Simple but easily touches the heart.

The first stanza is especially spectacular.

Thank you for sharing 🙏🏻

Lavender

3 months 2 weeks ago

Hello, Rula,

Thank you for reading. I always appreciate you!