Enough!

pain...
like electricity
shooting through
to nerve endings
pulsating,
insideous and raw
until all I can think of is
pain...
joints on fire
from shoulder to finger tips,
back to hips
to knees!
these target areas
blaze in agony
fibromyalgia
and psoriatic arthritis...
when is it enough!???

About This Poem

Last Few Words: *I'm having a very bad day, following a very bad night.

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Northwestern Wisconsin USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, William Blake, Bob Dylan, Tom Petty, Carlos Castaneda, Jim Morrison, the whole of Neopoet and many more.

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Comments

raj

4 years 11 months ago

Dear Cat

sorry to know the pain you are enduring...it is perceptible in these verses.....wish you a good relief ...

be well..

Candlewitch

4 years 11 months ago

dear raj,

as the day dwindles to evening, it gets worse. but by morning's light it eases up. thank you for your kind wishes.

*hugs, Cat
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raj

4 years 11 months ago

dear Cat

my continued best wishes for you to get well soon...

be well..

c lynn brooks

4 years 11 months ago

Cat

I hear you I am going thorough the same with my forearm and hand it never ends does it

Candlewitch

4 years 11 months ago

hey Chrys,

it seems like there is always a new one just waiting to appear. Steve says thank you for the suggestions.he will work on it later :)

*love ya, Cat
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Candlewitch

4 years 11 months ago

thanks Teddy,

by bedtime I am almost in tears...I'm too darned mean to cry, lol. on top of it, I am an amnesiac! but a sleeping pill helps. and Steve reads to me every night. that relaxes me. I'm almost human by morning. thank you for being you!

*warm hugs, Cat
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Candlewitch

4 years 11 months ago

hello Jerry,

I use meditation and self-hypnosis, when I can get past the pain and concentrate, it isn't easy, tho. would love to read your secret recipe! thanks!

*hugs, Cat
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