Enough

Enough
is a beautiful word.
It gives me strength.
It gives me power.
I have grown.
I have developed.
I am enough
for everything.

Being good enough.
Being smart enough.
Being well enough
just to be,
to be in this moment of time
in this way,
and on this day.

I can do anything
when I am enough.
I can be anywhere
when I am enough.
I can be anything
when I am enough.
I just am enough,
and that's good enough for me.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: "I am enough", phrase which makes me a better person. I say it every morning. I remind myself to be enough - this is my power and my strength.

Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: VIC

Favorite Poets: Dorothea McKellar, Henry Lawson, Banjo Paterson

Comments

neopoet

3 months ago

Neopoet AI - version 2.0

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "Enough" effectively conveys a message of self-empowerment and self-acceptance through the repetition of the word "enough" and its positive associations. The structure of the poem with short, impactful lines reinforces the theme of self-assurance and contentment with oneself. However, to enhance the depth and impact of the poem, consider incorporating more vivid imagery or specific examples to make the message more tangible and relatable to the reader. Additionally, exploring different poetic devices such as metaphors or similes could add layers of complexity to the poem and engage the reader on a deeper level. Overall, the poem successfully conveys its central message, but further development in imagery and poetic devices could elevate its impact.

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