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Sep 19, 2020
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ENTERTAINING DREAM
Last night she rambled
like an egg
she scrambled
then the whole night
she in thoughts bled
how to avenge the man
like a shambled up bed ..
the whole night passed
in a way like as in day dreaming
wide awake
she besides me
trying to scream
voiceless
no one should hear
she quivered
made me shiver
where is your liver
come let me taste it
you can't now deliver
go away
let me satisfy
myself my own loving way
in my dream
sucking ye
don't now ever come
near me
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Revengeful
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
4 years 9 months ago
I guess...
you should invest in some fresh Viagra, the stuff you are using must be out of date. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
4 years 9 months ago
lol
Viagra
i have had no need to use
to date
@82
but it now seems
i'm out of date
for minuscule
few
none
now me woo
lol
Geeeee
HOW DO U DO
Geezer
4 years 9 months ago
I do well...
with no need for it either. LoL
~ Geez.
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lovedly
4 years 9 months ago
grt88888888888
Nice to know
lol
old age is no secret or is it