Euphonious English Workshop Part #2

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Ephemeral Happiness ( Euphonous English WS part#2)

Seize
All the
Ephemeral
Happiness that
Life is offering, whenever you can
For they'll fly one by one 'way in no span;
They'll be drifted
Forever
Away
Man

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Tetractys, a poetic form invented by Ray Stebbing, consists of at least 5 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 10 syllables (total of 20). Tetractys can be written with more than one verse, but must follow suit with an inverted syllable count. Tetractys can also bereversed and written 10, 4, 3, 2, 1. Double Tetractys: 1, 2, 3, 4, 10, 10, 4, 3, 2, 1 Triple Tetractys: 1, 2, 3, 4, 10, 10, 4, 3, 2, 1, 1, 2, 3, 4, 10

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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Comments

Race_9togo

2 years 7 months ago

Hey Rula,

its been awhile, Palestinian Lady, I hope you and your family are well.
This little piece is wonderful, short, but so powerful, and absolutely true.

Rula

2 years 7 months ago

Great to hear

From you Jim
All is well. Hope you and yours are doing well too.
Really appreciate your time and the support.

Rula

2 years 7 months ago

Thank you Mark

For your quick response and the appreciation.without your workshop I wouldn't have written any.

Geezer

2 years 7 months ago

Changing...

and ephemeral pleasures, are the product of fertile minds. A mind that is not used, becomes stagnant and useless. I se that you have found ways to keep actively engaging in the world of poetry. Your use of the many forms of poetry, are astonishing.
Good work! ~ Geezer.
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