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lovedly

Apr 12, 2020 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Equalizer Nature...edit

Equalizer Nature

When one is born
is
NUDE
when one is torn
is made
NUDE
but the fact of life
is not to be
CRUDE

When we leave the
Earth
we all are same
uncovered
like at
Birth
Nude

So leave an everlasting while
inevitable print
just one of smile

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

5 years 3 months ago

Loved

If we leave that line before the last, we could get a more universal read

So leave an everlasting while
inevitable print
just one of SMILE
(like Loved does)

ALL THE WHILE

5 years 3 months ago

Thanks Rula

your are always apt
thanks done

5 years 3 months ago

I guess...

that is one way to say that as we come into this world bereft of clothes and naked, we should go out the same way; wearing nothing but a smile. ~ Geezer.
.

C

5 years 3 months ago

lovedly

I would use the word nude one more time after--- uncovered like at birth
there is something oddly eerie about this poem I like it very much